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Posted by tettegouche, Mon Aug-25-08 12:49 PM
You have a nice start, but there is much room for improvement. The color palate is not working. There is too much text that make it look like a word document, not an interactive site. The text is what I call "happy talk" where you talk about the business too much and not enough about what people are on the website to find out. The "call to action" buttons such as "sign up for a free lunch" "guestbook" and daily updates are seemingly haphazardly placed without much thought. The page does not flow well, meaning that it is not clear where a new visitor is to look first, second third... The entire site appears to have been designed by template.

This is an excellent article that may help: Top 10 Web mistakes small businesses make.

Let me know if I can help,