2361, RE: Celly Smellys - cell phone wipes with flavor! Posted by BigBrightBulb, Thu Apr-17-08 05:19 AM
Okay, you get big huge fat bonus points for a clever idea and cute-as-heck website!
I really enjoyed the detailed About page, doesn't everyone enjoy hearing how an idea came together? Also, I appreciate your simple purchasing process (I do so love PayPal), and that you offer a combo pack for those of us who like to sample in a buffet-style buyer kind of way.
My only suggestion is you might add a quote or two about dirty phones from the articles you've listed on your PR page. You've got some pretty big names there (Gizmodo, ABCNews), so you may as well leverage them in a testimonial style headline where folks can see them. They make a compelling argument, so highlight them.
I posted your URL to Twitter, hope something viral comes from it :)
Best of luck!
Crystal Digital Curator http://bigbrightbulb.com Advice, ideas, answers, and inspiration for the smallest businesses with the smallest budgets
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