Your idea has real potential in terms of viral marketing. I know that you didn't ask about this, but you could build a list for email marketing by offering chapters or even special content relating to the "saga" not on the website.

A couple of suggestions:

On the Concept page, add a line between the paragraphs. It looks better, and people tend to scan copy. Breaking it into smaller chunks attracts more readers.

I would lose the "Under Construction" at the bottom. For anything major that you still haven't added, you could just note that somewhere on the main page. All sites are basically "under construction" anyway, as we are always adding and updating.

Good luck!

Nancy
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